Wednesday, June 2, 2010

Journal 9: "Skeleton 2"

It was an ordinary Friday night. Steven took a quick shower and drinks his milk. His mother read his favorite bed time story and kissed him goodnight. That night was different, because he can’t fall asleep. He decided to go downstairs to drink some water and watch his favorite show. It was already midnight, when he heard something from the second floor. Steven tiptoed upstairs quietly so no one can hear him. He heard whispering voices from that floor. He just can’t figure out where it is exactly coming from. He heard footsteps that are trying to walk carefully. He heard the noise again while he was climbing the stairs. At the top was a hallway, extending in both directions were his room, his parents’ room and small library were located. He was a little scared because it sounded like a mysterious thing is happening. His parents’ won’t do that kind of noise. He continued walking and investigating quietly. The corridor was dark except for a pinpoint of light emitting from a keyhole of his room. He slowly opened the door, and there were his Mom and Dad holding a birthday cake with a birthday candle, singing a birthday song for him. He almost forgot that it is his birthday!

Introduction to Journal 9: "Skeleton 2"

My fifth piece in my portfolio is my Journal 9: "Skeleton 2" assignment. In our week 5, our professor asked us to write a journal in a skeleton format. She gave us four choices and I chose the third one. A skeleton is an outline of the scene. In this journal, I gave life and more details before and after of each sentence. I decided to also put this writing in my portfolio because I want to show the readers on how to make a skeleton writing.

"A Better Christmas Shopping Experience"



Why do we always have a hard time completing our Christmas shopping on time? When Christmas season arrives, all of us start hunting the stores to find those perfect gifts for all our loved ones. Worst, people tend to do last-minute shopping, thinking that stuff would be cheaper, without realizing that worst gifts and prices are results of waiting until the last minute of Christmas. Shopping for Christmas gifts is one of the most exciting as well as the most tiring part of Christmas. You keep walking around the mall for hours just to find the perfect gifts for your loved ones. However, the surprised look on their faces after opening the gifts makes all the effort worthwhile. Christmas should not really be stressful for all of us. We should enjoy the season of giving. Although Christmas shopping can be really expensive, stressful, and time consuming, we can still find ways to lessen it. We just need smart shopping tips to make this year, the most memorable Christmas shopping experience.


First, save money three months before Christmas. Set enough budget for Christmas. Keep in mind that Christmas savings also include Christmas cards, holiday meal, and new clothes for the kids. It would hurt less if you are prepared before you start spending money on Christmas shopping and to help you not to put your credit card at risk. One common holiday shopping mistake is to put everything on the credit card. You can end up paying for Christmas for several months this way. People tend to overspend more when they use credit cards as well. Maxing out your credit card can be so painful after Christmas. You would not want to welcome the New Year with a big balance on your credit card.

Next, you should know who you are shopping for. Make sure that your lists of names are complete. Check your list many times and make sure you didn’t miss anyone. Just like Santa, it’s important to make a list and check it twice. Write down everyone who needs a gift this year. Family and friends are first on the list, but don’t forget to put small gifts on the list for people like your teachers, co-workers, and the kind neighbor down the road who helps with shoveling the snow. It’s also a good idea to have a few generic gifts stored away just in case there’s someone unexpected who pops by or there is someone accidentally missing from the list. Beside each name, put your budget that you’re willing to spend for that person. This will help a lot if you’re really trying to spend just the money that you saved for Christmas shopping. Making a list of your gift recipients and knowing how much you will spend on each one will help you look out for bargains.

After making a list, think of a perfect gift for each person. Gifts don't have to be expensive. Try to discover what makes them happy, stuff that they collect, or simple things that can be memorable to them. If you have no idea what to give, gift cards would be nice and practical. As they always say, it’s the thought that counts! Make a list of all the gifts you wish to buy before you go shopping. If you wait for inspiration to strike, you could be wandering aimlessly around the shopping center for hours.

Once you figured out what gifts you are planning to get, try to compare prices online. Comparing prices in the stores can be time consuming and stressful, especially once the holiday shopping rush has started. So consider using the internet to compare prices, but do remember that the store's price may vary slightly from the price offered on the retailer's website. You can also try to find discounts and great deals by using coupons. Some of the stores offer coupons for customers especially when it’s Christmas season. You’ll be surprised how much you can save from these deals. Keep your eyes open for a good bargain; however, don’t compromise on quality.

The most important tip is to do your holiday shopping as soon as possible. The earlier, the better. Find the best time of the year when you can start your early Christmas shopping. One of the perfect time just before Christmas is the Black Friday. You don’t really have to buy everything in your list. Just spend the money that you have in your savings. Starting Christmas shopping early is not just a great way to avoid the holiday shopping crowds. Christmas shopping doesn’t need to be restricted to December. Shop when something catches your fancy. You can store it away for Christmas day! One nice thing about shopping early is that not all the presents have to be bought in a few days. Purchasing Christmas gifts can be done at slow leisurely pace. Keep the list in a purse or wallet and keep an eye out for wanted gifts when out doing regular shopping. Check the person off the list as each gift is bought and make sure to keep the receipt. Saving all the receipts from your Christmas shopping expedition is really important. You may need it later when your gift turns out to be faulty or has a missing part. Your gift recipient will also be glad if you can get a gift receipt in case they would want to exchange sizes or replace it for the stuff that they really want.

Once you are done with your Christmas shopping, gift wrapping will be the last step. It will be nice if your gift will look presentable and special. But if you don’t have enough budget to spend for special gift wrappers and designs, you can still make it look good and simple. You can find affordable gift wrappers at dollar stores or you can use a recycled gift bags.

Being prepared for the Christmas season is really helpful, especially with your Christmas shopping. Saving money ahead of time and finding great deals are really important tips. It is better to feel the real spirit of Christmas rather than spending too much time stressing yourself out. Once you get to finish your shopping early, you’ll get more time to spend doing other stuff, like decorating your Christmas tree, cookie baking with kids, planning what foods to cook on Christmas Eve and just enjoy the Christmas season with your family without thinking too much if you’re done with your Christmas shopping.

Introduction to "A Better Christmas Shopping Experience"

My fourth piece is my Final Major Writing Assignment. In this writing assignment, our professor wants us to write a Process Essay. A Process Essay either tells the reader how to do something or describes how something is done. I decided to write an essay about "A Better Christmas Shopping Experience". I made sure that I gave details in each step. I also gave the reason and advantages for each shopping tips. I decided to include this writing in my portfolio because I believe that I did some improvement when it comes to my writing skills.

Journal 12: "Good Advice"


I used to treat life as if there is always tomorrow. I don’t say sorry to the people I hurt. I don’t say I love you to the people that are important to me. I ignored people’s presence. Because I always thought that I still have a lifetime to do that. But one incident made me realize that life is short. We’ll never know what will happen today. We’ll never know who we might lose today. It is my grandmother who taught me that I should forgive those people who have caused damage to my heart. She always tells me that life is too short to be angry. I should learn to forgive, let go, and move on. She died without me knowing that day, that it will be my last moment with her. I wasn’t able to tell her that I love her. My grandmother taught me a lot of things. But for me, this is the best advice that she gave me. Since the day that I lost her, I always ask myself these questions every day. How often did I tell those closest to me how much they matter to me? Do I say I love you every day? When did I last embrace the person that is nearest to my heart? When did we last spend time together? I know I treated life better since I kept my grandmother’s advice in my heart and in my head. Every time I have a problem, I don’t cry over it, but find a solution to it. Every time I am with the person that I love, I don’t let the time pass by without telling her how much she means to me. Now, I am living my day as if it is my last day here on earth. I find time to enjoy, relax and give as much as I can give to have a peace of mind that I deserve.